?

Log in

Previous Entry | Next Entry

Since everyone in LJ-land is off doing WHATEVER it is when you aren't entertaining me, I had to amuse myself. By reading FOUR bad!fic stories. Don't kid yourself and think I wasn't having fun. I got out my pad of paper and a pen and recorded the best of the worst to share. I'm so happy!!


In the "you really haven't had sex before, huh?" category:

  • "Buffy blinked quickly as Spike's voice managed to make her clit pucker." I think this chick read "lips" and really thinks it IS a mouth. Probably not a good idea to associate "sour" with a vagina. Just sayin'...

  • "'Aggghnnngggnn...ahggnnnnnnnn' Buffy replied." Sweetie, someone needs to put a wallet on her tongue. She's clearly having a seizure.

  • "Her body jerked and twitched like a broken electric cable." So Spike promptly called the power company and had someone discard of her, since he remembered the PSAs of his youth regarding broken power lines.



In the "Best(Worst) attempt to turn me, the reader, on" category:

  • "cream colored dew" Mountain Dew tried to "energize" milk and market it, but it failed miserably. But Buffy kept a bottle.

  • "her ridiculously wet pussy" I mean, come on, Buffy. You kidding me with that pussy? Get a frickin' panty liner, for hell's sake. It's ridiculous!

  • "After Buffy finished her stripe [sic] tease, a guy patted her on the behind. Spike saw it then beat the guy unconscious. The defining moment made Buffy realize Spike was the jealous possesive type. [no, you don't say?] She knew he cared for her. She looked into those blue soul-filled eyes and the need to chastise him was long forgotten." There is so much wrong here, I barely know where to begin. I wonder if his soul-filled eyes had flecks of blood on them? Silly Spike, giving someone a concussion for Buffy!! Now make my pussy ridiculously wet! Also, I wonder if a stripe tease meant she was drawing wiggly lines or circles?

  • "Spike had opened a bottle of lust inside her." It was a fine bottle, 1984, not quite vintage, but had a lovely "Mountain Dew" taste. The bubbles were more irritating than sexy, however. She didn't think he'd ever find the cork...




In the "Oh, Dear God, EWWWW!!" category:

  • "Buffy had bever been in love before unless butterflies, constant smiling and perspiration were any indication." CONSTANT PERSPIRATION?? That is fucking HAWT. And her constantly tossing up and a moronic grin means some lucky boy is getting lucky, if he can get over the dripping sweat and vomit. It's fun to play with commas.

  • "her pussy still potent with her distinct smell of lust" It was like one part vanilla and three parts wildebeast. And it had been sitting out in the sun, pissed on by a pack of wild skunks, then knocked into a sludge-filled ditch of dead fish. Yet, a note of cherry blossoms linger...

  • "'Suck my tongue.' Buffy caught the tender flesh, sucking on it until a blood red hickey appeared." I don't think I've ever heard that particular appendage after "suck my..." But maybe it's just the boys I've been with. Second, a hickey? On a tongue? This is the fourth (you read that right) time she's put that in a fic. Just bite the fucking thing and be done with it.



And in the last (and in my opinion, the most important) category, "You just can't make this shit up:"

  • "Seeing his inner beast baring itself to her was animerotic." I HAVE A NEW FAVORITE WORD!! Someone is obviously quite into NC-17 Animorphs fic...

  • "Spike has turned Buffy out like a red-hot light." I kinda don't know what this means. I don't think she does, either. Fast and without a second thought? With a light and fast touch so as to not get burned? With revulsion because of the dead bugs gathered at the base?

  • "Spike submerged himself in her essence because tasting Buffy was a prerequisite." I think I took that class for my Biology degree: Buffy Poon: 101. What a snooze-fest. Note to author: big words don't make a fic better if you use them wrong. But the image you planted in my mind was so animerotic that I egressed my She-Juice all over the audience of my desire.

  • "triggering his explosion of hot, white icing." I prefer buttercream, personally. it's too bad in this AU that Spike wasn't a Prince. Royal icing is pretty. And let me just be frank for a second. Ejaculate tastes like a sweaty hand full of nickels. If it TASTED like icing, well, I would have one in my mouth all the time. Wow. TMI?

  • "Spike I...ahnnnuuhhnn...ahhannnnnunnn" "What is it? Talk to me, luv?" HA HA HA HA HA!!! She has this same exchange no less than 5 times in one fic. Are you actually saying those sounds? Don't just read them. It makes it more fun. My cats are looking at me strangely right now.

  • "awakening his cock inside its denim prison" Denim Prison, by Calvin KleinTM Was it in your stocking?

  • "he used the threaded end with the belt buckle and slapped it against her wet pussy. Buffy cried out feeling the splashed juices on her inner thigh. The slight sting on her clit..." I'm sorry. SLIGHT? Slight sting? And for God's sake, Buffy Anne Summers. Enough with the ridiculously wet pussy. (I like a good spanking, as much as the next naughty girl, but SLIGHT sting? From a man's belt buckle on the pucker clit? *snerk*)


And my absolute most favorite attempt at poetry within prose from a scene where Buffy makes Spike fuck her on a dirty mattress behind the Bronze while a homeless man watches and claps for them...

  • "Old cigarette butts, discarded wrappers, and bottles traveled passed [sic] them from Mother Nature's breath."



Wow. This chick has given me HOURS of happy time.


And now for something completely different: got a card today from violethamster that STILL has me laughing. Jesus' Bar Tips: He makes a drink so good you'd swear it was a miracle! HA HA HA!! I love my flist. (says like Jame Gumb:) I'd love you. I'd love you so hard.

Comments

( 58 comments — Leave a comment )
slackerace
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:42 pm (UTC)
yummy. submerging oneself in another's essence. But, why are you chastising Buffy for her overly wet pu$$y (i hate that word)? She apparently can't help it. It might be a disorder. She may need to see a specialist.


hey, i love your icon!!
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:53 pm (UTC)
Hee hee!! I think Buffy MUST have a disorder. Splashing? Certainly Glaxo-Kline-Welcome makes a pill for this...

I've been on an icon frenzy, apparently...

(Doing fine? Move okay? Settled in? Have a Happy new Year!)
... - slackerace - Dec. 27th, 2004 03:01 pm (UTC) - Expand
sangpassionne
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:43 pm (UTC)
ROTFLMAO!

That is both terrifying and hysterically funny at the same time.

*hands you bottle of bleach*

stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:54 pm (UTC)
isn't that AWFUL? In a completely delicious, pass the time and feel better about your own writing kind of way?

*takes bleach, pours into ear, lays on side*
(Deleted comment)
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:55 pm (UTC)
BWAH HA HA!! Mating snails are HAWT!!! I just pooled up in my chair all swampy-like.

See, I read this shit so you don't have to. I like to think of it as my public service. Too bad my parole officer doesn't see it that way...
ex_dovil323
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:53 pm (UTC)
There are not even words enough to express how much I'm laughing right now. Oh hang on, ROTFL. That will do nicely.

I want a Spike for my kitchen and I can stand him over my cakes and hold his wanger like a piping bag and decorate them with his tasty cum o icing! And shake him and squeeze his balls really hard to get the last icing out of the bag. Hmmm, would you like tea with your cum cake, Vicar?

Oh, that's just dirty and wrong.
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:57 pm (UTC)
I AM POUNDING ON MY DESK WITH TEARS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. Oh, Jeebus, the piping bag thing is the funniest thing I think I've ever read. Squeezing the balls!!! Maybe you can feel me pounding on my desk with laughter...

I just love you. I'd love you so hard.
... - ex_dovil323 - Dec. 27th, 2004 02:03 pm (UTC) - Expand
... - lynnenne - Dec. 27th, 2004 03:56 pm (UTC) - Expand
... - stoney321 - Dec. 27th, 2004 04:19 pm (UTC) - Expand
... - ex_dovil323 - Dec. 27th, 2004 06:00 pm (UTC) - Expand
... - stoney321 - Dec. 28th, 2004 07:27 am (UTC) - Expand
inlovewithnight
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:54 pm (UTC)
Okay, I'm dying now. Where do you FIND these?
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 01:57 pm (UTC)
AFFN, bay bee. They should have a tag line: Home of the Best Bad Fic.

*gives you mouth to mouth, ignores looks from your family*
jstabe
Dec. 27th, 2004 02:36 pm (UTC)
Is it wrong to be glad that you had to amuse yourself?
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 02:44 pm (UTC)
Absolutely not. As I mentioned above, I feel it's my public service to you all. I suffer so you don't have to. Hey! I could be the new Jesus!
poshcat
Dec. 27th, 2004 03:04 pm (UTC)
Holy funny, Batman! So glad you posted this.

I mean, come on, Buffy. You kidding me with that pussy? Get a frickin' panty liner, for hell's sake. It's ridiculous!

Silly Spike, giving someone a concussion for Buffy!! Now make my pussy ridiculously wet!

It was like one part vanilla and three parts wildebeast.

Whoo, let me just catch my breath here.

And let me just be frank for a second. Ejaculate tastes like a sweaty hand full of nickels. If it TASTED like icing, well, I would have one in my mouth all the time. Wow. TMI?

That just may be the funniest thing I've ever read on LJ.

(I like a good spanking, as much as the next naughty girl, but SLIGHT sting? From a man's belt buckle on the pucker clit? *snerk*)

Stoney, I...ahhannnnnunnn. Hee!

Silly Spike, giving someone a concussion for Buffy!! Now make my pussy ridiculously wet!

I've friended you, of course. Badfic and funny relatives. I love you already. :0)

PS Only four picks for the dead pool? Seems a little scant there, missy. What, no Dick Clark??
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 03:21 pm (UTC)
I'm working on some more. Dick Clark!! Dammit, that one is almost a sure thing! But the point value is iffy...

Be sure to cry out ahunnunggguunnnhhnnuh next time you writhe and jerk like a broken power cable. Unless you want to be touched again.

If you get bored, I have about nine other posts with this one person's bad fic. She has inspired many icons.

I'll be thinking of soon to be dead celebrities! Just got my Entertainment Weekly, should be chock full of hopefuls.
kita0610
Dec. 27th, 2004 03:49 pm (UTC)
You make me happy.
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 04:18 pm (UTC)
Hee hee!! Hey - you never emailed a PO Box or snail addy for the Spangel CD. It's just sitting on my desk all sad and lonely, no where to go...
... - kita0610 - Dec. 27th, 2004 04:53 pm (UTC) - Expand
ely_jan
Dec. 27th, 2004 04:30 pm (UTC)
Holy shit. I often type LOL but this is the first time I had the wipe the tears from eyes in order to see the screen and enter the letters!

I will worry no longer about the quality of anything I decide to write!

This was as painful as watching the losers tapes from the Americal Idol show! Of course, I just couldn't stop watching those either!

Thanks for being the best fic monitor ever!! (Do you get to wear a snazzy sash like a hall monitor?)
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 04:36 pm (UTC)
AHH!! I want a sash! And a sceptre that is really a toilet brush. If you get bored, I have about 9 more of these posts in my memories under Bad(Great!)fic. This one doesn't even TOUCH some of her other stories. Ever wonder where my "she-juice" icon came from?

I wondered about my own writing until I discovered this girl. And she gets feedback!! POSITIVE FB! It's unfathomable.
... - ely_jan - Dec. 27th, 2004 04:42 pm (UTC) - Expand
tgray
Dec. 27th, 2004 05:11 pm (UTC)
Please tell me you're paying someone to write these things! While completely amusing, it's somewhat scary at the same time. This can't be for real, can it? ::blinks::

Thanks for sharing! Hee!
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 05:29 pm (UTC)
How could she be paid for something so priceless? Ha! no, she is completely for real, and quite prolific. This one doesn't even TOUCH the really bad ones. I've saved the snarky comebacks in my memories if you get bored, under "Bad(GREAT!)fic."

Example: her orgasm made her vaginal walls snap at his cock like a pissed off aligator.

This is where the "Cream of Cum" and "She-Juice" icons came from. It's just amazingly bad fic.
... - tgray - Dec. 27th, 2004 06:53 pm (UTC) - Expand
... - stoney321 - Dec. 28th, 2004 07:26 am (UTC) - Expand
violethamster
Dec. 27th, 2004 05:41 pm (UTC)
1. I'm sitting with my legs crossed really hard because OW.
2. Not eating any more gingerbread house. Because icing.
3. Icon love!
4. New vocabulary word "animerotic" must be worked into casual conversation from this day forward.
5. It puts the antiperspirant on it's skin or else it gets the hose again! *turns hose on Buffy anyway*
stoney321
Dec. 27th, 2004 05:50 pm (UTC)
"Yes it will! Yes it will get the hose!" It's fun calling Buffy "it."

Man, I have missed you around these parts!! It seems that I am not the only one making fun icons... (looks at yours and laughs again)
ely_jan
Dec. 27th, 2004 05:53 pm (UTC)
You have been plundered!
Thanks to your recommendation, your memories have been plundered and I laughed so hard my drink shot out of my nose thus giving me a carbonated lobotomy!

Who is in the most pain? The plundered or the lobotomized?

Thanks for pointing me to the funniest thing I have read in awhile!
stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:29 am (UTC)
Re: You have been plundered!
I tried posting last night, but stoopid LJ wouldn't let me.

Now, when you say funniest thing, I assume that means you haven't read the Wee!Spike series... (conveniently stored in my memories under Wee!Spike) Because those are my crowning glory. Which is kind of sad.
Re: You have been plundered! - ely_jan - Dec. 28th, 2004 08:11 am (UTC) - Expand
(Deleted comment)
stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:29 am (UTC)
*hugs you back*

I'm here to please!!
mskakaako
Dec. 27th, 2004 06:44 pm (UTC)
I finally made it! Checking in on you and I was rewarded with this! Yay! I have to go in a few, but...
BWAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHA!!!!

I HAVE A NEW FAVORITE WORD!!
Me too!!! I just have to check www.dictionary.com first. But, still! Favouritest word-EVAH!!!11eleventyone!11!

I think I took that class for my Biology degree: Buffy Poon: 101. What a snooze-fest.
That freakin' made me snort in a loud and obnoxious way. Heeeeeee!

I love my Stoney! Yes, I do! *mwah*
stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:31 am (UTC)
Hello, Moto!! Missed you... And of COURSE you are the one that laughs at the "Buffy Poon:101" line. I had tears on my cheeks while typing that. This chick is the best of the worst EVAH!

I love my Carmen!
cityphonelines
Dec. 27th, 2004 06:55 pm (UTC)
Suck my kiss!
"Old cigarette butts, discarded wrappers, and bottles traveled passed [sic] them from Mother Nature's breath."
*sniffle*
That's so beautiful!
*blows nose honkin' loud*

As far as the icing goes I prefer a nice lemon glace<--the 'e' should have an accent. Y'know the real drizzly kind? Yeah, like that.

Needed. This.
stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:32 am (UTC)
Re: Suck my kiss!
Man, she's writin' poety, she is. And you can just feel her NEED to convey the b'yoo'eeful words as you go along. You can practily hear her wheels turning while you read. SO sad. I want to send her a nice email to help, but then, where will my source material go?

Feeling better? miss you.
makd
Dec. 27th, 2004 09:31 pm (UTC)
found my way here via dovil. I am laughing out loud. My husband and daughter are reminding me that I have a surgery appointment in the a.m. and must be rested, but I just. can't stop. laughing.

I just bookmarked this spot. I know it's gonna help me recuperate. Or open my stitches.

On second thought.....

stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:37 am (UTC)
Ouchie!! Make sure they give you a few extra pills for pain, then come stay with me. ;D

Oh, I have pa-LENTY of these posts stored up to help you strengthen your belly muscles when the time comes.

(Get better quick, okay?)
wendylouwho
Dec. 27th, 2004 10:50 pm (UTC)
I mean, come on, Buffy. You kidding me with that pussy? Get a frickin' panty liner, for hell's sake. It's ridiculous!

I can't help it, I laugh every time I read that.


"Buffy had bever been in love before unless butterflies, constant smiling and perspiration were any indication."

Does that sentence make sense to anyone but the writer, because I just don't get it.

Thanks for the laughs. I needed that. I love badfic. Not enough to read it myself, that is why I count on fellow LJ'ers to keep me updated. ;-)
stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:38 am (UTC)
Yes, I see my actions here as a public service to folks like you. FOlks that respect their brains too much to fill them with this shite.

Your welcome! ;-)
chantal87
Dec. 28th, 2004 02:48 am (UTC)
Spike I...ahnnnuuhhnn...ahhannnnnunnn" "What is it? Talk to me, luv?"
The love I have for you rocks harder than Spikes cock awakening inside its denim prison. I feel the need to shower you with gifts and chocolate.
Now I have subject lists for the next 18 to 20 journal entries I post. I cant wait to use the word "animerotic"

stoney321
Dec. 28th, 2004 07:39 am (UTC)
Re: Spike I...ahnnnuuhhnn...ahhannnnnunnn" "What is it? Talk to me, luv?"
Oh, my god, my husband got me the KNOCK OFF version of the denim prison, by Old Navy. Whatever.

Animerotic is the best new word EVAH.
(Deleted comment)
vincitveritas
Dec. 29th, 2004 11:30 am (UTC)
You know that feeling you get when you're like, "what?" and then you chuckle for a second and then say "what?" again and laugh really hard because you just can't make sense of whatever may or may not be intentionally funny? Awesome.
(Deleted comment)
velvetwhip
Feb. 27th, 2005 03:29 pm (UTC)
This is without a doubt the most hilarious compendium of bad!fic excerpts I have ever encountered! I am doubled-over with hilarity! Thank you for sharing!


Gabrielle
stoney321
Feb. 27th, 2005 06:08 pm (UTC)
Hee!! you know, there are nine more of these in my memories, if you need to laugh... Be sure to have bleach (or a good fic) on hand to cleanse your brain afterwards.

... - velvetwhip - Feb. 27th, 2005 06:21 pm (UTC) - Expand
lusciousxander
May. 21st, 2007 04:03 pm (UTC)
LMFAO! Thank YOU for making me feel way better about my fanfics.

"Her body jerked and twitched like a broken electric cable."

That surely opened the bottle of laughter inside me! LOL!
stoney321
May. 21st, 2007 04:27 pm (UTC)
AHAHAHAHAHA! I mean, really. This stuff is GOLD! *clings to the purple prose*

Oh, full disclosure: this sort of thing (these posts) are ALSO why I'm a bully. Flee while you can! *grin*

Your lovely comment made my body explode with hot, white icing. Because I'm actually made of cake frosting. (Shh, don't tell!)
darsnape_dracul
Mar. 7th, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
what does [sic] stand for?
stoney321
Mar. 7th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
It's Latin for "even so." Or, in other words, "as intended." When someone misspells a word, and you quote it, a [sic] is noted so people don't think YOU misspelled the word. :)
( 58 comments — Leave a comment )

Tags

Are You Actually

Reading this? I'm just curious. Because that's really detail-oriented of you. Feel free to stop reading. But you can see that there's more here, so are you going to keep reading? Really? That's pretty dedicated. I'm impressed. No, really. I'm not being sarcastic, why do you get like that? See, this is the problem I have with your mother - yes. YES. I'm going there. It's time we put all of our cards on the table.

I love you, why are you doing this? After all we've been through? You don't have to be like this. You know, still reading. You could be baking a pie. And then sharing it with me.

Time Wot It Is

April 2017
S M T W T F S
      1
2345678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
30      
Powered by LiveJournal.com